
When we showed different people our music video and the feedback was generally positive but there was a common theme for improvement which was mainly the narrative as the audience couldn't tell what was actually going on but that I believe is down to it being unfinished as the initiating scene in which the narrative starts isn't completed yet. In order to correct this we have to input the audio for a conversation that happens off screen which will make the narrative much clearer as the dialogue while being small is debatable key.

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